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  1. 純喫綠

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  2. ChaoChou

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    哇！明日之星
    技巧與編曲的概念很不錯
    台灣樂壇少不了你呀
     
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    謝謝你的支持...我會再努力的...!!
     
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  4. FrankY08

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    老實說你編的旋律蠻吸引我的!
    可能是較具音樂性吧!

    但是我認為好像少了點張力..
    詮釋的方面?

    我的一點點意見~
     
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  5. 純喫綠

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    好像你說到了重點...我其實也覺得張力不夠...也許之後會加上較有張力的solo...謝謝你的意見..
     
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    綠兄也有自拍"blues"的影片，小弟蠻喜歡的，因為那首的有點jazzy blues的感覺，而且有融合別種曲風的手法，小弟覺得很特別，小弟
    覺得綠兄應該放blues的影片上來會比較好，應該小弟很喜歡那種痛。
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2TkK3uMjzGk&NR=1
     
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  7. jackcloud

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    整體感覺很流暢耶QQ
    tone也不錯

    一點淺見 抑揚頓挫方面比較薄弱
    像前面板友提到張力的部分稍微補強 然後一些地方留白一下就很完美了!!

    加油加油!!
     
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  8. 純喫綠

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    好像大家都比較喜歡blues這首...最近在著手寫一首類似的曲風....完成後再請大家指教....謝謝大家摟!!
     
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